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Comment on You’re a Functionality Doc… by IzzelSanchez

IzzelSanchez — Tue, 21 Feb 2012 01:19:02 +0000

No Entiendo!

Comment on Adrienne Burns’ functionality document by The Terrestrial Pirate Lord Xetan

The Terrestrial Pirate Lord Xetan — Mon, 20 Feb 2012 22:36:33 +0000

I dig it. It’s simple and clean and the number of images is limited and not overwhelming. Who’ll update that twitter feed when we’re gone from here, though?

Comment on Josh Bennett working 2012 sitemap by Venessa Hernandez

Venessa Hernandez — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 03:08:28 +0000

Hey I like how you separated the bios by branch. I don’t think that’s been done before. Don’t forget about the faculty. Very nice and simple layout. Good job.

Comment on Kyle’s Creative Brief by Venessa Hernandez

Venessa Hernandez — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 20:33:12 +0000

Hahahaha! Hahahaha! Kyle you are a unique butterfly and that is why I like you. I like the addition of mobile phone enabled content. It’s perfectly aligned with the technological advances of our world.

Comment on Josh Bennett Wireframe by IzzelSanchez

IzzelSanchez — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 17:40:44 +0000

This layout is more direct and simple, all pertinent information up front. Looks like a business card.

Comment on Hendrick Simoes Creative Brief by Venessa Hernandez

Venessa Hernandez — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 14:33:31 +0000

I love that you have tailored your message to a single audience. It’s a very great idea. I especially enjoyed this idea: “Upon completion the website can be marketed as a possible link resource on the Syracuse University Career Services website as well other career related websites in the local area.” I think it’s a great idea to give this website a bit of a higher purpose than it has had before.

I do think maybe alink page for student resources would be OK. BUT I don’t want to take away from a goal that I mentioned, which is to make it about the quality of our work and the quality of the SU military VI program so we can try to get this back in the coming years.

I think attempting to dedicate a portion of the site to bringing the program back is very important and should not be overlooked. If we don’t try this we would be defeating our own purpose and doing a disservice to the future visual information field.

I think you have a very directed brief here. Sorry for ranting!!!

Comment on Armando Gonzales’ Site Map+Wireframe for Poor Ol’ David by Venessa Hernandez

Venessa Hernandez — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 14:22:35 +0000

I see a few people have gone beyond the wireframe process and straight into trying to design a website. Here you have this awful glowing typeface for the banner or headline. A wireframe is supposed to be empty containers saying what will be filled there and buttons with no style. Styling your site comes later. Quite a few people have jumped the gun here and have created things that look almost as bad as the original site.

Comment on Josh Bennett Wireframe by Venessa Hernandez

Venessa Hernandez — Mon, 06 Feb 2012 14:17:09 +0000

Where is your sitemap? I think some people got confused about what a wireframe’s objective is. A wireframe shouldn’t contain photos. It’s purpose is to structure the site and leave the sections open for creative ideas to fill them.

Comment on PDP – Mike Brady by Mike Juneau

Mike Juneau — Sun, 05 Feb 2012 23:39:05 +0000

Nice use of graphics.

Comment on Efren Lopez Poor Dave’s Pub by Mike Juneau

Mike Juneau — Sun, 05 Feb 2012 23:38:42 +0000

Great layout